MaybeAndrew

Haha, thanks so much for the review! I actually edit the stories as I go along, after each review, but I thought an edit this big would just confuse previous ...

Thanks so much for the review malice! I have factored in many of these critiques into the redone version of this chapter! I'm glad you liked the epigraphs. I have ...

Here's everyone that contributed and what lines are theirs. Once again thanks y'all! And thanks for being brave enough to post your first piece! I'm so glad you all kept ...

Thanks for the review! I agree, that last line of the poems probably the best bit (:

Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun with this piece!

Thanks a ton for the review! I had a lot of fun with this! Yes, and maybe I should edit some of that royal language, I'm no ecper either

Thanks niki! I had a lot of fun with the poem

Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun with it!

haha, thanks for the review malice! I was interested to see what you'd say, having seen my current novel. I agree with everything you said, and yeah, as you can ...

Thank you so much for the review on my ooooold piece, I'm glad it brought back memories of elementary school Say what you will about elementary school students writing, but ...

Thank you so much sammmwich! And welcome to the site! If you liked the story, you could always start with the first chapter (; If you have any questions about ...

Thanks so much for the review I'll be sure to edit those things. And hehe, yeah, I def need to slow down the pacing a bit... we'll see how that ...

Thanks so much for the review!

Thanks for the review! I've edited all those mistakes. Sorry I haven't been replying to the reviews. I really value them, but I got so busy and then forgot to ...

Thanks so much for the review! sorry for the late reply, I've been reading your reviews and loving them... just to busy to respond. Thanks again! I'll keep all that ...