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Re: The Day He Said Thank You
Andrew here with a review! And also you seem new, so welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about the site, feel free to ask me! But into the ...
Nov 12, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 7.3
Andrew here with a review! These bits have been interesting and are giving us a bit more of a lead, I do have to admit I'm a bit confused at ...
Nov 12, 2021 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows - Flames with In - Chapter 1
Andrew here for a review! Caught this just as it entered the green room! Happy to see it here. Overall, this chapter was good, it introduced what looks like our ...
Nov 3, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 7.1
Annnndrew here with a review! For the last two sections Once again, my favourite character might be aria, as an older sibling, I relate to her on that front, but ...
Nov 2, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 6.4
Andrew back here for a review. The calmness of this chapter is good, it's definitely going to help us build towards more action, the stargazing seems like a way to ...
Oct 27, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 6.3
oooooh the good emotions are continued here Andrew here with a review! I know it's been a while, but umm, gottt really busy, and started The Brother Karamazov, which for ...
Oct 27, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 6.2
AWWWW I LOVED THIS CHAPTER I GOT WHAT ASKED FOR ABOUT SEEING OUR CHARACTERS DEEPENED BY REACTING TO CONFLICT I WANT MORE Into specific! "But what if they were not ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 5.5
AND THEY SEE THE LIGHT Andrew here with a review. Since these tidbits are so short I think I might start reviewing every other chapter so I don't overthink it ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 5.3
HEyyyy Andrew here for a review. This is a good chapter all in all, needs a bit of editing and sharpening, but this is a first draft after all but ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 5.2
Andrew here with a review! Harry and Daisy's exchanges are once again cute and heartwarming if a bit repetitive. The possibility of spaceship cleanup promises some interest, so I'm looking ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 5.1
Hey, Andrew here for a review! I accidentally read part one of chapter six before this, so I was a bit confused, but this chapter makes much more sense. I ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.5
surprise surprise, it's me again. Overall, a lot of the tension is defused here as we reach a conclusion to whats happening... somewhat But into specifics Daisy shut her eyes ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.4
Now the crap bounced off the fan and hit the wall, an exciting turn of events. No, but Andrew here with a review. Overall, exciting but once again I want ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows - Flames with In - Prologue
Aaaandrew here with a review! Saw this was a new start and thought hey, why not give this book a go. Overall this chapter was well written, it felt dark ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.3
and I'm back The reviews keep coming and they won't stop coming. Overall, more excitement, more info about the object, so that's nice, characters continue to be good, all comments ...
Sep 25, 2021
