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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3

    1. Does the political aspect of this chapter convey how close South Africa is to a dictatorship despite claiming to be a democracy? The poltical aspects are defiantly interesting. Its ...

    Sep 20, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Halls of St. Julian's - Eduard 1.1

    Andrew here with a review! Saw this in the green room and thought I'd give it a read - and I'm glad I did. It's amazing! Very well written, clean ...

    Sep 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2

    Andrew here, sorry for the delay. I would say I'm busy, but I'm always busy - though I do hope to be a little more on top of reviewing over ...

    Sep 8, 2022
  • Other » General, General Re: [DELETED]​

    I'd just like to say, this piece brought me to tears. The exploration of mortality, impernance, and ends really blew me away. This poem, among its many facets, is obviously ...

    Aug 31, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Darkest Faewilde Ch.1

    Hey Gem! Andrew here with a fast review! I always meant to review finders, but never got around to it, so I was happy to see this in the green ...

    Aug 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: all the baggage tags i didn't throw away

    First impressions This was a fun poem! It uses the interesting setting of packing to capture a variety of emotions -none of which are super positive though. XD My favourite ...

    Aug 22, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 0, part 1

    Andrew here for another review! I'm not one hundred percent sure where this happens conrogically, but tbh it might be my favorite chapter so far. You're definitely improving! But into ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World Prologue

    Hey Andrew, here! It's been a bit! so sorry, I've been crazy busy all summer, but I hope to be reviewing more of your pieces of the next couple of ...

    Jul 21, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Apostle

    Aaaandrew here with a review! I don't normally review poetry, but the religious themes in this one caught me! First impressions: As a religious person, the use of religious phrases ...

    Jul 12, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.3

    Baaack again for a very late review! I am sad to see this is the last of this story I can review on the site, because I have been enjoying ...

    Jul 12, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.2

    Andrew here with a very very very very late review! So sorry about that, my life got a bit outa of control! (or more accurately, very in control, I have ...

    Jun 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.1 [old]

    Andrew here with a review! I've seen you around a lot Snoink (in fact I think you might be the oldest active member on the sight, so I kinda feel ...

    Jun 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: ​A Eulogy to Alphonsa

    Aaaaandrew here with a speedy review! The poem grabs me and elicits different types of emotions than I'd expect from something about the end of childhood (murder isn't the gentlest ...

    Jun 13, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 4: Induction

    Andrew is back here after a billion years. Sorry, was on vacation, but now, you should be getting a review from me every couple of days! First off, I really ...

    Jun 13, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Untitled Short Story Part 1

    Andrew here with a review! This story was in interesting look at the power of perspective with some cool worldbuilding. I like the idea of the moon making a sound. ...

    May 31, 2022


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality