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Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 4
Andrew here with a super fast review! Every chapter I enjoy this story more, sorry that I'm so behind, but I hope to catch up soon. Lets get into it! ...
Sep 23, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3
1. Does the political aspect of this chapter convey how close South Africa is to a dictatorship despite claiming to be a democracy? The poltical aspects are defiantly interesting. Its ...
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Re: The Halls of St. Julian's - Eduard 1.1
Andrew here with a review! Saw this in the green room and thought I'd give it a read - and I'm glad I did. It's amazing! Very well written, clean ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2
Andrew here, sorry for the delay. I would say I'm busy, but I'm always busy - though I do hope to be a little more on top of reviewing over ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: [DELETED]
I'd just like to say, this piece brought me to tears. The exploration of mortality, impernance, and ends really blew me away. This poem, among its many facets, is obviously ...
Aug 31, 2022 -
Re: Darkest Faewilde Ch.1
Hey Gem! Andrew here with a fast review! I always meant to review finders, but never got around to it, so I was happy to see this in the green ...
Aug 24, 2022 -
Re: all the baggage tags i didn't throw away
First impressions This was a fun poem! It uses the interesting setting of packing to capture a variety of emotions -none of which are super positive though. XD My favourite ...
Aug 22, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 0, part 1
Andrew here for another review! I'm not one hundred percent sure where this happens conrogically, but tbh it might be my favorite chapter so far. You're definitely improving! But into ...
Jul 22, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Prologue
Hey Andrew, here! It's been a bit! so sorry, I've been crazy busy all summer, but I hope to be reviewing more of your pieces of the next couple of ...
Jul 21, 2022 -
Re: Apostle
Aaaandrew here with a review! I don't normally review poetry, but the religious themes in this one caught me! First impressions: As a religious person, the use of religious phrases ...
Jul 12, 2022 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.3
Baaack again for a very late review! I am sad to see this is the last of this story I can review on the site, because I have been enjoying ...
Jul 12, 2022 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.2
Andrew here with a very very very very late review! So sorry about that, my life got a bit outa of control! (or more accurately, very in control, I have ...
Jun 28, 2022 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.1 [old]
Andrew here with a review! I've seen you around a lot Snoink (in fact I think you might be the oldest active member on the sight, so I kinda feel ...
Jun 15, 2022 -
Re: A Eulogy to Alphonsa
Aaaaandrew here with a speedy review! The poem grabs me and elicits different types of emotions than I'd expect from something about the end of childhood (murder isn't the gentlest ...
Jun 13, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 4: Induction
Andrew is back here after a billion years. Sorry, was on vacation, but now, you should be getting a review from me every couple of days! First off, I really ...
Jun 13, 2022
