MaybeAndrew

Back again with your harsh review! I know this took like infinitely long, but it's finally here! Sorry for the delay. Let's jump right in I guess! This chapter was ...

Okay, overall this was an interesting chapter. The Russian nesting doll of protection is fun, and I always feel like in stories when the bad guy just has one layer ...

There is a chance that was my tired butts fault

Really my main thing to say is that this is relatable! He parks Talking to himself I'll ask her out. This really hits a thing inside me. I get this ...

Hey harry! Here for a quick review of your chapter. What I liked Well written and interesting kick off. The idea of a bunch of super police meeting from all ...

Okay, so this was pretty fun. I haven’t read any alpha pack (yet) but these goof balls were definitely likable. Nothing much seems to happen, but their magical bro shenanigans ...

Hey there! This was really intriguing. The shops of gambling away your future seems ripe for stories. Definitely great for mid life crisis. Our main character is interesting and likable. ...

Hmmm, quite an advancement. Seeing some powerful humans. (REPRESENT) Also, Merlin in Britain? Holy grail? Knights? Who say ni? Sorry, something strange just happened. I'll put away my red string. ...

Dang, Fen is so likable. Can we make him the main character? XD. No, Val is much more in need of an arc. Someone needs to kick that guy's butt ...

Okay, this was interesting. I liked the Thunderbird, they were very cool and primordial. The quest for Val is becoming more defined, and I'm excited to see this little twirp ...

Hey! Andrew back to review your chapter. This was definitely fun, cool to see our hero in action, and it kicks off what seems to be an XP collecting adventure, ...

Okay, back for your harsh review! I have read all the chapters you've come out with so far, and I'm going to spread out my feelings about the overall plot ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your chapter. Great follow up to the last one. This newfound ability seems like it can be helpful but it's not too powerful, and this ...

Okay! Andrew here for your harsh review! First off, it's frustrating that I actually like the first thing I must harshly review, (; because this is pretty good! Chill opening, ...

Dang, that was good. Our main character is so main charectering, our bad guy is so bad guying, and the horror is so horroring. There are a few parts where ...