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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The System.

    First of all: Wow. This was really good, it seemed like a book I would actually read. I didn't have much to critique in the plot, but there were some ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Relapse

    Wow. Matthew this is so incredible what. A few typos: Reminisc to reminisce ignight to ignite You are on lost? Not sure what that means. In the line "Always caring, ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The First Encounter

    I thought this was really good, I didn't have a lot of suggestions for plot. There were several grammatical mistakes I'd like to point out though. In the first line ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 1

    Hey! To start off, I really liked this. I'm usually not into the whole fantasy genre, but this seemed like something I would enjoy reading more of. In the beginning ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Science Re: White

    First of all: Wow. That was really intriguing. I enjoyed it quite a lot and didn't see much to be changed, so this is probably going to be a rather ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Winter murder...

    Hey, Maya here! This is actually my second review, so I'm sorry if it's not as helpful as you'd like. First of all, I enjoyed reading this. I actually wish ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Through The Middle, Episode 5: Bitten

    Hi! This is my first review so I am sorry. Here goes...First of all, I have not read the previous chapters. Sorry. This was very well written though! One thing ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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— Kaia