MayApple

Hey! This is your first attempt at poetry? are you sure? Because this was really good. My only problem is the punctuation. You do not need to punctuate every line ...

May here, I really like this poem. I do, a lot. BUT.... I feel like I am reading a story sometimes, your lines are just too long. For example: The ...

May here, This is a really good expression of faith, and it really has anicemessage to it. It really shows us what faith and believing can be like, and s ...

May here, I love how you are really honest about your day, and how you make every little thing seem so exciting. My favorite part was "I let out a ...