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Re: The Tragedy of Waiting
I also thought about maybe writing stories about moments in high school
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: The Tragedy of Waiting
Yeah I'm better at writing those
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: The Tragedy of Waiting
Thanks for the tips! I'll try to fix them. I wrote this over the summer kinda quickly and realized I was t very good at romance type narratives
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: Can You Hear Me?
Fantastic job for first time lyrics! This is Beautifully written and should be an account if song. Loved the way I interpretted it would go. Radio played Taylor swift all ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: I Shot Santa Claus in Self-Defense
LOVE THIS OMG. I was dying laughing. You have a talent for comedy my friend. Please write more like this. I love the way it is written. I agree with ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Burnt Silver
Yes! I am new. I uploaded a really short "story" if you'd like to review it. I'm trying to get points to upload part of a story I've been working ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Burnt Silver
This is great! The way the characters are portrayed is very well done. I encourage you to branch out more and explore different types of elements within the story. Keep ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Burnt Silver
This is great!
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: The Tragedy of Waiting
Hope people like it
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: The Seniors
Thanks. I may post some more tomorrow or over the weekend.
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: The Seniors
Thanks. Im so busy with school right now that I'm trying to figure out what direction to pull this. Maybe just a generic narrative but that's probably boring. I thought ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: The Seniors
Thanks for the tips. That last line wasn't supposed to be in was more of a "pour out random thoughts and submit this to see what happens".
Oct 1, 2014
