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Re: Under water.
Fantastic narrative! That first paragraph is great! The way this is written blows me away! I love that line those are the people worth writing about" as a fellow writer ...
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Re: Abandoned by Disney
Oh dear AHHHH. I visited Dosney this summer and this makes me shiver. I've never been a horror fan but for some reason I decided to read this. Is this ...
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Re: I Shot Santa Claus in Self-Defense
LOVE THIS OMG. I was dying laughing. You have a talent for comedy my friend. Please write more like this. I love the way it is written. I agree with ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Hope- CHAPTER 1
Holy hell this is fantastic. I love the direction it's going in. The description you gave for this pulled me in and I only got pulled in more and more ...
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Re: Untitled 1.0
Wow! Great start! Already pulled in. I feel like that last IF is foreshadowing something bad though. As for titles, can't really help you there because I myself find it ...
Oct 2, 2014
