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Re: A Warm Break in Martha’s Vineyard -Chapter 1
Ooh, can't wait for the next chapter! Want to find out what happens!
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: These Scars
Ooh, I really liked it! Catchy, yet easy to understand. Fun, but not boring.
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Love is Lillies
I thought it was OK. I agree that the theme at the end should be weaved into the poem instead of plonking it randomly at the end.
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Lover's Cry
Flower~Child said it all. Way too repetitious, loses the reader's attention and interest.
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar~2
It's going along great! I'm glad how you explained a bit more of her situations in life. I agree that it was confusing when you abruptly left off talking about ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Call of the Dragon-Prologue Newly Revised
I like it! I'm totally into the fantasy type stories. I agree that "the white dragon, the black dragon" got REALLY annoying and confusing. Besides that...it's a book I'd read!
Oct 19, 2010