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Hahah this was actually really funny! Much better then anything I could have written at 10. Slipping on the banana peel totally made me crack up!!!! :D Overall, I like ...

Wow, this was awesome! Really original and creative. There was one thing I didn't like, however: With that said, the fish and the philosopher became roommates. It was a little ...

Don't stop writing!!! This has potential, but as the others have said, it is way too rushed. I'm like confuseled! lol! ;) I would love to read the rest of ...

Holy crap this was freaky! It was like part of a movie I watched (can't remember the name) where they had clones and lied to them about the rest of ...

I didn't feel like reading everybody's reviews, so I might repeat something already said: I like the excitement and action, but right now it's rather emotionless and "Oh another spy/assassin ...

Well, since the previous reviewers covered most of the questions, I'll just say I agree with them. There are a lot of "whys" in this story. I can understand that ...

Hey, thanks for letting me know the new section was out. :D Catching the look on Morgan’s face, the stern look in his eyes softened. Bending slightly, he placed his ...

Wow, this has got to be one of your best chapters yet! Great job! The first sentance was a little confusing, as baywolf25 mentioned, but other then that...awesome job! :P

Ooh I love it! I agree with previous posters that it would sound AWESOME as song lyrics! You should totally build on this, and use it as song lyrics...if you ...

I'll not comment on the few mistakes, (which are few) since you mentioned this was just a rough draft and you'll fix up the errors later. I like it so ...

OK, first of all, why is Morgan so unconcerned about her mom's welfare? I think you should write a chapter about the "bad guys" and/or about the mom's whereabouts and ...

As usual, a wonderful chapter! Only one suggestion this time: In some areas you have really long paragraphs, making it harder to read. Like when Argo and Morgan reach the ...

I totally agree with borntobeawriter, I mean, I wouldn't have read you're story this far if I hadn't looked it up on your profile, after asking you where I could ...

Morgan had been labouring away at this work for at least three hours before her father returned. He looked very tired, and more worried than when she had last seen ...

You are one amazing writer! You have true talent. Just a couple questions: Why does Morgan's father allow her to be so rude? Why does she not get punished for ...