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MattJF

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Just Leave.

    I think you've done an excellent job, considering you wrote this in math class which has got to be the most mind-numbing subject on Earth. my favourite line has got ...

    Jan 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Green Apple

    Cool. I love your writing style. I can tell the meaning behind your poem, and it is powerful. What I admire and enjoy the most about your work is your ...

    Jan 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Would Sing to You

    Wow! Your poetry puts mine to shame. Makes this winter seem more endurable. You would be crazy to change your poem it looks fantastic as it is! Well done! :elephant:

    Jan 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breakfast

    A good poem. Descriptive with good vocab but not too complicated. I like that. I think you've done a pretty good job and it flows perfectly. I like the subject ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Cat Steps [1] DRAFT

    I love your fantasy. The names and culture of the characters described in your story sound very exotic and mystical. One question, where does keranis magic come from. Does everyone ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Determined: The Story of A Beautiful Jew. Chapter One.

    I love this. Its a great start to a story and ill definetly be reading the next chapter. i think that its a great setting and idea because it reminded ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Normal or Something Like it

    i thought it was a really good story and you obviously have a talent for writing but for me it was too twilight. i have to agree with some of ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Coffins

    I think that Coffins is a great piece of work. The imagery is vivid and powerful, i could see the graveyard in my mind and the mourners, it stuck in ...

    Jan 23, 2010


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray