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Re: Citadel
You're very welcome :)
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much for the review :)
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thanks for the review. I liked the part of the "all children" part being there twice, at the start and at the end, which sort of concludes the circle :)
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much for this! Thank you for reading my poem and thanks for commenting such nice things :)
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much, that is very sweet of you to say :D
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
I know... I was being sarcastic. And it turns out that the person has done it before.
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you, and while I don't see this as a very bright or heartwarming piece, I guess everything is relative :)
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Welcome to YWS, I feel very privileged to be your first read, thank you :) That line was actually coincidental at first, but then I started thinking in the same ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much, and it was quite hard to write, took loads of tries, and then loads of revision. Good luck to you, too :)
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work, and yes, I am new here. I always have problems with the punctuation because I think that too much makes ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much for reposting all of the previous reviews, it made it so much easier to read them... Truly thank you!
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Thank you so much for the review, and thanks for taking the time to read my work :)
Nov 15, 2014
