User avatar

MathiMouse

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Citadel

    You're very welcome :)

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much for the review :)

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thanks for the review. I liked the part of the "all children" part being there twice, at the start and at the end, which sort of concludes the circle :)

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much for this! Thank you for reading my poem and thanks for commenting such nice things :)

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much, that is very sweet of you to say :D

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    I know... I was being sarcastic. And it turns out that the person has done it before.

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you, and while I don't see this as a very bright or heartwarming piece, I guess everything is relative :)

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Welcome to YWS, I feel very privileged to be your first read, thank you :) That line was actually coincidental at first, but then I started thinking in the same ...

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much, and it was quite hard to write, took loads of tries, and then loads of revision. Good luck to you, too :)

    Nov 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work, and yes, I am new here. I always have problems with the punctuation because I think that too much makes ...

    Nov 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much for reposting all of the previous reviews, it made it so much easier to read them... Truly thank you!

    Nov 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Thank you so much for the review, and thanks for taking the time to read my work :)

    Nov 15, 2014


It doesn’t smell old, it just smells like a bad idea.
— James Hoffman