Master_Yoda

Hi Isha :) Here is a bit of a review for your story to add to your collection. I hope that it helps. The main problem that I have with ...

Hey Elinor :) This is one of the only times that I've reviewed poetry, so I apologize if the review's not up to scratch. For me, poetry is defined by ...

Hello there Kanen, I thought I'd drop by to give your piece a quick review. So, a writing exercise... Turn yourself into a bird and see how realistically you can ...

Hi Hero So, this will probably be a pretty short review as I haven't read Percy Jackson. I'm going to focus purely on the stylistic elements of your writing. Your ...

Hi Kanen, I'm sorry this is so late, but it's the first chance I've got. The problem that is most visible in this piece is the fact that your characters ...

Hi There Worx :) I haven't spoken to you in ages. Glad to see you around. Here's the review: I don't know how long I'll have, but I'll start off ...

Hi there I haven't reviewed for a while and I'm very pressed for time so forgive me if this isn't comprehensive. Let's start with your characterization because that's what struck ...

You, good Galerius, are a marvelous writer. Here is your requested review. Your characters are strong, your story line is strong and your prose is enchanting. In fact, your piece ...

Hi Tigs :) Thanks for the edit. :) Let's start with your prose. You write a fairly easy to read story which flows and is quite entertaining. This easy style ...

Honestly, while I found the book to be a somewhat enjoyable read, I found it weighed down with certain baggage that did not allow the book to reach its potential. ...

Yo Rebz :) Reading the start of this story made me rather happy. Immediately visible is your potential as a writer. Your story is by no means flawless, but it's ...

Just got to add an additional book that I've read since. Ursula K. Le Guin has a book entitled Lavinia that is a fantasy set in Trojan times. It's a ...

So, Antigone has already given you a pretty awesome review. I think I should just emphasize the tense and lack of description issues. Compared with when you first joined YWS, ...

Now we're talking! What left me completely befuddled and bemused was what happened to Dream Kim. We suddenly decided that we were going to ignore her and focus on Ted ...

Hey Rosey, I saw your blog entry and decided to come see if I could be of assistance. :). Now, I'm going to start off by saying that I think ...