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Re: Crystalline
I have really enjoyed this beginning of a story. I agree with some of the other reviewers that the beginning grabs you in and holds your attention. I don't find ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: We burried the Heroes.
I didn't get a nice feel from the poem. To me it reminded me of a Country Western song, which does not mean it's bad but just needs some work ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Only a Soldier
I loved this poem, very moving and emotional. Their days are not numbered, But as they're marching and crying, They hope by the Grace of God, That they might be ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: I love you
I thought the poem was cute but not original enough to grab my interest to pass it off to a friend. I think you have a lot of emotion behind ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Saved
I didn't like the story for the same reasons everyone else liked it. This was way too sad. I was hoping for a romantic story not a drama. At the ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Do you believe in me?: Prelude /P
I found the story to be a little confusing. First, I thought the main character was a woman and then I thought she was a lesbian so when I found ...
Apr 10, 2009
