MarySue

Thanks for the help! I'm glad you found it interesting!

Thank you very much! The only trouble I'm having a hard time fixing is the length of the chapter, this story is going to be told in 2 different P.O.V.'s, ...

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the help!

Oh boo. I did mess up the tenses xD when my computer wants to cooperate, I'll be sure to fix it! I think I'll do it....using past tense? I'm thinking ...

You're quite welcome!

I think I was just confused as for what to call it, I didn't consider it a chapter, so I suppose more of a preface? It wasn't the whole "Prologue" ...

You're quite welcome! Don't change it on my account though if YOU like it as is though xD I've never written for this genre, so I don't know where you ...

Very sweet! Grammar and spelling are fine. I enjoyed reading this a lot!

Thank you! Now that you mention it, the P.O.V. does get a bit hairy there, I'll fix it straight away! I think this was meant to be more of an ...

Hello! And thank you very much1 Ah, well, I'm not sure if 'prologue' is the right word exactly xD It was just a starting point for me, and I didn't ...

xD I actually wanted to start it off in your cliche fairytalish manner, I'm glad you decided to read on too though ^^ I actually was referring to one of ...

Oh, I wrote it that way on purpose. Since I usually post my work on DeviantArt, I got use to putting a lot of spacing into my story, since I'd ...