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  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Village

    Hi! wizartjay, I just read your story. I really enjoyed the mysterious atmosphere you've created in the story. The introduction of the character Vivek Ghosh adds a interesting element, and ...

    Jan 18, 2024
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog

    Hello, saadamansayyed! I really like this story. It is really really interesting and good especially for your 7 year old sister. I like how the dog is a stay but ...

    Feb 4, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The True Story of the Big Bad Wolf

    Hi, LadyTano! I really enjoyed this story, and i think it was a really good and creative story. This made me change my perspective on the story of the three ...

    Jan 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 12: Emergence

    Hello, I really enjoyed reading this amazing story, and the whole thing was very interesting. I really liked the beginning part of the story "This is torture" because I am ...

    Oct 20, 2021
  • Art » General, General Re: The sorrowful lander, and the CCP minions reaching out to the ends of the earth.

    I really like this story. It has some really good details, and dialogue. I also like the beginning because I hooks me in and makes me want to read more ...

    Oct 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Gabriel-The origin story-A clown’s death

    I really like the detail in this story like Lucas's devious smile. I also liked the twist in the story when Denese and Lucas betrayed Gabriel. You also did a ...

    Oct 7, 2021


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes