Mars

oh mon dieu. this is really amazing. i loved the imagery. i think it is really beautiful. you go from roses to stars to black holes to cosmic dust (nice ...

It failed you and it failed me. LOVED that line. The day started normal Just like any other day The rain fell without a breath But the tree fell anyway ...

i don't think i can find much to say that hasn't already been said, except that it actually seems kind of in the stephanie meyer-style (author of twilight). i don't ...

wow. wow. this was really great, really original. the only thing i would change maybe is when you say "his literacy master plan" it seems kind of weird, and i'm ...