Markontheworld

My grammar sucks.

Cool Simba avatar by the way! =^_^=

They're alive. They just exist outside time.

Thank you! I probably should've warned people my grammar tends to suck.

Thank you for pointing that out I hadn't noticed! Also isn't that Kirito from sword art online as your avatar. If it is awesome!!!=^_^=

Thank you! The homonyms that I miss spelled we're cause of autocorrect. At the begging of this I was trying to make people question what we know as facts. Anyways ...

Wow! That was amazing Mango! It was all so detailed and it flows really well too. My only problem is that I have no clue what the protagonist looks like.. ...

Waaaay to long man cut it back a little

Oh cool!

Ok maybe I will! Thank you again! =^_^=

Thanks! =^_^=

Afterwards I wrote "Cold stone wraps around me like a blizzard, blocking the warmth." Insinuating the "me" being referred to in this poem felt it, but then it was torn ...

Oh! I didn't even realize I spelled that wrong, thanks! By the way the MY was supposed to symbolize Melinda's new independence.

Thanks again! =^_^=

Thank you! Sorry about the confusion, it's just that since I wrote this in the POV of Melinda Sordino from speak I didn't see the purpose in stating they were ...