Markontheworld

Yeah addictions can be hard to beat, but never give up! Overall I really liked this poem, but I'm kinda confused did you mean to have it as all one ...

Hmmmmm, I don't really know what to say. It's a really good poem don't get me wrong. I just don't one hundred percent agree with the message I suppose. Every ...

Wow such a beautiful poem!!! Let me guess, hope right? If so it's such a strong one. However I feel like something's missing, something that you usually have in your ...

Interesting, I take it this occurs during the medieval times or at least something close to it. It's pretty gory, but I like it. Shouldn't "king" be King instead? I ...

Hey Hershey, really loved your poem! It's so simple, yet so deep. The only part I don't like is the part where you say "Life is a game of hide ...

Another brilliant chapter! Of course this one's kinda sad. It's hard to tell who's at falt more here. I mean I understand why Violet's mother was angry, but did she ...

I read the summary and was like challenge accepted! So here I go! First of all very good poem, the last line is what makes it make sense. It means ...

It's a very beautiful story. However, according to the description you gave me shouldn't there be more to the story. Unless you're adding another chapter. If so I can't wait ...

Wow a very powerful message here! You either mean the "him" being referred to awakened your bad side, or he was nicer than you. Either way I don't believe it ...

How old are you? Cause really no one still in high school can be this good. It kinda reminds me of speak, but not really. I think I'm officially addicted ...

Dang aang that was just dark! Still not bad though, I like the third stanza. Where you wrote "Life isn't fair, end it now. You're young, but it's "right." Despite ...

Another Terrence story. I think I'm officially in love with this series. I've said this once and I'll say it again, there is nothing more hilarious than someone strangely literal. ...

Creepy? Oh no, this wasn't creepy in the slightest! Though it was very well written in my opinion. The only problem I have with it is the beginning. Where you ...

This seems more like a story than a poem. Granted it's still beautiful, but I don't believe it's a poem exactly. I can see the point clearly though. Hope, right? ...

Oh jeez! This was flubbing hilarious I kept picturing the "Hey Arnold!" Mr. Simmons being a male version of Ms. Sunshine. It was kinda creepy, in a funny way. I ...