Marishke

This was a really good poem with a lot of emotion. I especially liked the last part indicating a broken heart but still wants that person to still be happy ...

I really like this poem of what it is about and how clear the message is. In the thirteenth sentence it says "many" twice so you might want to fix ...

I wonder if each time there is new dialogue you could space it out so we could see it more clearly. I wonder if you could make your first sentence,"In ...

I really like the intro sentence, it makes me really curios and leaves me wondering what is going to happen. I wonder if you could check your spelling in the ...