MariaRowlands1

I'll say it again. O.O' KEI! THAT WAS AWSOME!

I like this chapter better than the other two. Esspecially the end. Nice touch. It's rather interesting but also it enchants the mind and imagination with the ideas of what ...

This is better than the last chapter. I rather like this story. If I was judging it against the other stories that I have read on here, it'd be about ...

Whoops! I was talking about chapter 4. I clicked on the fourth chapter to go to the first. SORRY! :(

WOW! Yet again, I am absolutely fascinated by this story. Great job!

My style of writing involves hiding the general idea of the plot. This way it'll keep you wanting more and wondering what is next. And I'm glad you like it. ...

That's not the problem. The problem is that it won't let me make a new paragraph.

Nice story! I have no issues with it. It's rather creative but also quite funny. Please continue!

Just letting you know, I tried to fix it up so it would look normal but it won't work. Can you possibly tell me how to get it to work?

Wow! Again, this chapter, like the last, has completely set me off what I originally thought it would be like. I thought it's more of a Twilight story but no ...

This is really good! You might need to describe the characters a little bit more though. But all in all, a good start.

This is amazing! Thoough I don't understand how it connects to the Prologe. So I'm rather confused. But I love the story and firmly believe you should continue writing.

Listen. This is just a rough draft for my story. I'm just posting it part by part to see what others think. Wait for the first chapter before correcting me. ...