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MariaCee

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: From Dawn to Dusk

    Ah, okay okay. I deleted the preface; I didn't know. D: Sorry. Well, I don't know. Maybe I made it too confusing to understand...I do that a lot. xD But ...

    Oct 20, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Courtship

    Rhyming has, and probably never really will, be my sort of thing; I can see from where you're coming from. Thanks for the suggestions/help. =)

    Feb 17, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: its not her fault.

    I also consider is cliche, but it's pretty good nonetheless. You're aware of the feeling, which is a key point. Overall, pretty good. Keep it up.

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Silent and Deadly

    Hah, I like it. :D Creepy, though funny. Very random.

    Feb 10, 2007


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