MargoSeuss

Well I'm glad you found this amusing! May I suggest you begin from chapter 1? Skunk is a person! :P He was nicknamed that on account of his skunk-like hair. ...

Ah. Yes that does happen on this site. I usually put either a dash or a star between my stanzas to make them work. If I don't this site screws ...

Thanks for your review. I see your point with the hook. I think I know how to fix this. I will also consider your other suggestions. I really appreciate your ...

Once again, I'm thrilled you enjoy my fantasy poems. This poem is the start of a novel I've been meaning to write. Perhaps I should get on that!

Thanks so much for your kind words! The image was retrieved from (at least that's what it says in the corner of the pic). If you like this, you should ...

Amazing job! You adequately portrayed the way one feels after hearing one is no good over and over again. I could really hear the hopelessness in this poem. Beautifully written. ...

Neat. You could experiment with adding a few extra lines in to explain that. But you probably wouldn't have to. Cool poem!

Hi, Dragonpheonix. Thanks for your suggestions. Do you think besmudged sounds better than smudged? I originally wrote besmudged but then thought it sounded kind of silly.

Thanks so much! I have another poem like this called The Sword of Zalanzabar. Check it out if you wish.

Thanks so much for your review and suggestions, Darkthorn. I will be sure to divy this up into stanzas. Your comments means a lot to me. I'll be sure to ...

Thanks so much for your helpful suggestions and input. I will be sure to take your advice. I will be posting more chapters soon.

Wow! I'm flattered by your review! This novel was actually the start of what had me writing the stories about Terence. He come into this novel later on.

I honestly am a little freaked out by how similar Christian Abernathy and my character Terence Coon are alike. Your physical description of Christian is very similar to that of ...

Very well written lyrics! I would love to see this performed, Fiend.

Thanks, professor Dumbledore. I appreciate the compliment. There is more on the way!