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Re: Fission - [Edited]
The reference to Monazite left me thinking about Thorium, its radioactivity blah blah blah. (I know, I'm bit of a science freak!!) Coming to you work, the idea is just ...
Dec 25, 2012 -
Re: Feeling Lonely....
I will keep it simple. You have a good idea on what you want to write. But you fail to put it into effective words. You have a lot to ...
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: Puppy Love
After reading this piece, I've got mixed feelings. One aspect is that the idea is really cute. The crushes developed during young years can be very much sweet. But the ...
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: My Little Invalid
Hello :) My first reaction was - "whoa!". I re-read it a few times and I was surprised to find an underlying meaning every time. You've got a good writing ...
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: Freed
I agree with the last review about the thought provocative nature of the poem. different people might interpret it differently, sometimes to the surprise of the author. For me, the ...
Dec 22, 2012
