Maki-Chan

ok, I went over the review and re-edited my prologue. I have somewhat of a problem with repeating words. To let you all know this isn't a dream. Terra is ...

This was really good, no GREAT! I love how twisted it is. Well done. :D

hmm... I have to agree with everyone else. This is a rather good start, and I hope you continue it ^_^...oh you did. (OOPS) Well then I will go check ...

close. no wonder i failed history. (LOL) anyways, if you do write more, or even continue this you should pm me, and I'd be happy to read and review it ...

thanks ^_^ I am glad you liked it. I will go over it, and fix the stuff you stated. ^_^ Also 'smell the roses' is a rahter popular saying in ...

Thanks for the god review. I fixed it up, and added a better ending (I think). I hope its better ^_^

no one else wants to comment prologue or chapter 1?

Very interesting, I really enjoyed this. A few errors for spelling, but other than that GOOD JOB ^_^ I like your word use, it really flows togther.

ummm... This is kinda creepy. I can tell the 'main' character is in first person view, but you should use alittle bit of proper grammar. Also capitalize all of your ...

Tahnk you ^_^ I will fix up the minor errors. I hope you like chapter 2- it involves a trip to the doctor ^_^

thanks for, yet another awsome review. i fixed all the sstuff you pointed out, and rewrote the stuff you suggested. Also for "ile" I can't spell, and spell check didn't ...

To let you know. The last sentece holds a lot of importance in my story.

You really liked it, AWSOME! ^_^ I'll fix up the minorn errors you pointed out. To answer your question I will continue this. i will pm you when Its finished. ...

sigh.. I'm sad. There's nothing for me to help you with. Other than a good review of this. Its really great. I just love the way you use the words ...

This is a really nice poem. If you fix the mistakes pointed out it'll be really good. ^_^