Maki-Chan

Thanks for the review! I will edit this, however I have a question. In which we meet two men, the shepherd and the lamb. Hmm, not too sure about this. ...

HURRAY! I am glad you liked it Zakku! I somehow randomly got an idea for a story. A girl who lives next to a murderer. *W00T* I will definitely describe ...

wow! This is an amazing poem. I really liked this! Great job.

Well I have to say, this was pretty cool. I liked the part with the slanting words they sounded awsome. I am not very good at reviewing poetry since I ...

On your writing: you use the word 'however' far too much. Try and eliminate having to use it so much. The descriptions are generally bland and I think you could ...

Quote: I made a step and then quickly dropped onto the ground. “Beth! What is it?” Sera asked. I grunted in pain. “Ow… I’m not sure.” She lifted up my ...

Thanks! I am glad you liked this ^_^ I will try my best to make this more original (For a fanfict) and describe things more. Thanks for reviewing this :D

Nice word use ^_^ It rhymes... o_O I like this ^_^ Reminds me a little bit of how my brother is. Weird. But anyways I liked this good job!

well I liked this ^_^ There was something about it that made me so interested in this. Good writing style ^_^

Thanks and I'll edited this ^_^ Now to answer some questions! YOu are correct the reason for Beth hating Sera will be explained, but I am going to post chapter ...

Thanks for the help KTW (KissTHeWitch ^_^ "I like that name") I do tend to write stuff that makes some sense when I say it, but when other people say ...

here's the review of chapter 1!!!!!! Chapter 1 Sitting alone on a bench in the back of the classroom, I was longing for the sweet, sweet days of April and ...

You see Shippo is a completely different person. Later on you'll discover why he did what he did in the prologue. You see he is really a quiet, easily embarrassed ...

I edited this! ^_^ Hurray for being smarter! >_

W00T! I am not lazy I edited ^_^