Maki-Chan

I fixed it up. That's Momo for you. A selfish brat who has a bad temper. You'll see more stuff later on about her anger, and selfish attitude. Also she ...

*Alright its fixed. now the reason for Momo's actions. She is well reasponsable and kind of a motherly figure. Kinda like me ^_^ sigh..... She's also just really angry right ...

^_^ I love gaara! This poem serves him well. Nice job ^_^ :D

fixed it up, and thanks!

thanks ^_^

Hiya! ^_^ PN-Chan I just finished. And well I have to saw that this most surtainly drew me in. I'll will read more. Next chapter here I come!

Alright I corrected it. Thanks I hope you like chapter 5!

Alright I fixed it to your approvale and added a few other things. Sigh... The italics are just a force of habit. Also I kind of make the story with ...

* Naruto arrives in Chapter 4. Since I'm still very young I know I still have a long way to go. In hopes of ever being the great writer I ...

^_^ I know! I thought I was the only X-Play viewer. I'm not alone YAH! I'll fix this up, and add commas. Hopefully you'll like chapter 2- locked doors.

thanks. I try my best with this. ^_^

Cool I shall most defenatly make more ^_^

Thanks ^_^

WOw, old english. I hardly see it anymore. But I do enjoy seeing it because when I do, usually it is writtten quite beaurifully- yours is no exseption, but to ...

I think it was a little bit rushed, but that's just me. I like the theme and the use of words. ^_^