Maki-Chan

this is a very old peom. Just ignore it please.

awwww.....disappionted. Its wierd your shortest poem gets the most comments. Oh well I love your other work too, and will continue to read it. ^_^

though short- it packs a punch. ^_^ 9/10

well this is surtainly interesting. But can you space it out a bit please- hard for me to read. I give it a 7/10 ^_^

Its ok, but if you think it is trash than why post it?

^_^ I like this. When you post more, I'll defenatley check them out ^_^

this one is an old one. My 1st poem posted here.

GASP!!!!!! This was amazing- just like a reall Naruto episode. Its freaky. But I can't wait for more. ^_^ I think the others before me pointed everything out.

Wow. This is short, but I believe that it is a good thing. If you'd dragged it on it probably would of not of been good as now. Over the ...

I rather liked this one. Its form is interesting and intreaging. I give it a 8.5/10. Well done.

not bad. ^_^

not bad, but it doesn't really make to me. What is it about?

now I like this much better than the first. ^_^ Can't wait to read more.

*Note to self- relax with commas* thanks for your awsome reviews. I am still working on chapter 2. But it'll get here, and you'll be proud, of how great it ...

thank you ^_^ this brought me new insperation.