Maki-Chan

I will give if u will take My heart and promise not to break. Our scars are bigger then our hearts, wounds bigger than should be. This is a little ...

this poem is short, but sweet. I can feel the emotion in it. someone I knew once said to me come fly with and take the world in our hands ...

I find it is hard to review lyrics when you can't hear the beat they go along with, but I will do my best TT^TT I really like this only ...

Please add spaces between sections kinda like "blah blah blah blah, blah blah blah. blah blah blah, blah blah blah- blah blah blah." please add some spaces, it was hard ...

I like this poem, its just the format it is made that bugs me a little. Maybe you could do it like "I am from crazy intricate, painted ponies. From ...

Pretty interesting. Five tribes stood divided on rich land. Each of the six lands were connected together by one mountain called Kenass Mountain, which could be seen everywhere[u] on the ...

first off I have to say. Having Cancer sucks. But anyways not bad. I got into it. Which is actually quite a feet since I get bored easily. The main ...

well i loved this great job ^_^ he night clasps down on fires, and glowing orange fibers my favorite part. Nice job. Poetry is hard (at least for me) so ...

The Maketu horizon is a ruby crease. The tide creeps to our feet and the gulls are beginning to call high above the beachside fish shop. Dad’s eyes slide away ...

My opinion… This was written beautifully and I liked how you described things. I think though that the first three pages you ramble on about the images and it was ...

no problem I'll review your story! The only thing is... When you are posting on YWS post one chapter at a time. This way the reviewers do not get scared ...

AMAZING! Another chapter (part v_V) it was really cool. All I have to say is "RUN Ebony RUN!" (lol) the "FILTH" was a really cool name for the villain. You ...

WOW! Even though I haven't read the other parts this was just really good. Nice word use by the way ;) I looked at Lucy's review and well I am ...

I liked this, though I didn't really understand. Well I guess I did "Thea" (Is that who is narrating?) is really sad, mad, and feels helpless (lol- the title ^_^). ...

This was AMAZING >_< I love the way you painted with words. It was so fluent and just plain amazing. The way you made death see life was just really ...