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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Don't Slip Away

    Okay, I put it into stanzas, which was how the poem was to begin with but somehow got screwed up, but I don't feel the need to change any of ...

    May 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Pierced Heart

    I really love this poem and I don't think it's cliche at all. Your use of imagery was incredible as was your word choice. The ending was perfect and it ...

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rain Down

    I was interested in the poem because of the title, and I found the entire poem to be beautiful. I adored your word choice and subtle imagery. The poem flowed ...

    Apr 30, 2008


Sometimes my life just sounds like surrealistic fiction being sold on clearance at the book store.
— J. G. Hammersmith