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Mahvash

  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Psychiatric

    No worries :)

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sorry

    The use of simple and plain words makes the poem easy to convey a message. It's a highly emotional poem. It makes a reader cry. when I was reading this ...

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Journey within !

    Pleasure :)

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Acm I tried to split it up in stanzas but it was not working.

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    So you can read the poem in a way you want to :)

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Autopilot grammatically More Weaker is Correct.

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    I hope you get it soon

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Thanks for your review Sarah :)

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Hey thank you very much for this review. I was writing in a hurry and unconsciously made these mistakes. I really appreciate it :) I am gonna edit it

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Thanks for your review. I definitely miss-typed some words as I was writing in a hurry. But thanks once again

    Apr 5, 2016


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