MagicMilk

Okay first of all I loved the way you described the bar. The way you described it made it very easy to visualize. I also liked the greeter boy at ...

Man, that sounds like a terrible curse to have, getting headaches whenever someone is nice to you. That must be hard for Vtynno and Andromeda. Since you asked for feedback, ...

I loved the description of Azrail in the first few paragraphs and of the ballroom scene in general. My favorite types of environments in writing are ones with grand, fancy-sounding ...