Magenta

Okay. And they all lived happily ever after. The End... (Except for Timmyjake, he didn't live happily. He was eaten by a crocodile.)

Fine, I admit it! I haven't bitten you yet.

Sorry if that was a bit harsh! I hope you continue writing! ;)

Look in the mirror. I think you've grown a bit pale. Have you noticed your thirst yet? Do you find yourself looking tired, but better than before. Don't you remember ...

I've canceled your next therapy session, by the way. Oh, well I wouldn't call them therapy sessions. More like...feedings. *evil laugh*

Immortality becomes me, does it not? It was only but a year ago when I became immortal. Of course, it was painful, being bitten by a vampire. But I survived ...

Now hold it. You are both amateurs and you still haven't given me the correct amount from our last therapy session! That'll be sixty dollars. Did I mention that for ...

People, calm down! I know that YWS therapy is hard for you, but you have to learn to relax. By the way, that'll be fifty for the hour. Thanks.

Either your going post crazy or it didn't submit it the first time. Pease tell me your going crazy so that I'm not the only one... Please! ;)

Yep! No matter what I do, I can't stop myself from adding an exclamation point. They've even taken that button away, even though it has the comma as well. They're ...

Great poem here! Keep on writing! Gosh, I need to stop using so many exclamation points. It's been a habit for several years now. I even go to a support ...

Sure! Hope to see some more writing around... ;)

Sorry if I was a bit harsh in this review. Hope you write more!

Where is the poem?

Just a thought... I think this could be great if continued, but ending here will still be fine. Good job! ;)