Mageheart

Thank you for the review! The setting is actually the neighborhood I live in - there's some farm fields on the sides of the road. When I was walking around ...

You're welcome! I'm glad I could help. :)

You're welcome! :)

Oooh, I think I've heard of that film! Poems inspired by characters are the best. :)

Thanks for both your review and the compliment on my avatar! :)

YOU'RE WELCOME I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT

You're welcome! I hope it was helpful. :)

Thank you for your review! Your insight was spot-on. :)

You're welcome! :) And I feel like Askel would tell Akol that he can't make it illegal.

Something else I just noticed: you forgot the apostrophe in the title of the chapter. :P

Thanks! :)

Thank you for your review - and your golf puns. :P I'll definitely add a little more at the end. Your golf puns are actually really helpful for that. I ...

Thank you for your review! It was really helpful seeing what you thought about it - and this line in particular makes me want to write more political poetry: Like ...

Akol, dummy, there's a solution - fall in love with another human. There! Problem solved. You don't have to dig around for a probably impossible to find cure, and you ...

I can see this going three ways: Obraya betrays them, Obraya was going to betray them later on but gets attached so she doesn't, or Obraya is telling the truth ...