Mageheart

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter - and I'm glad you actually wanted more emotion. I feel like out of all of the characters I ...

Thank you for the review! I haven't really written Azazel/Issac before at this point in his story, so I'm glad that reading his perspective was enjoyable! The next section actually ...

Thank you for your review! When you mention Isaac's eyes glowing, do you mean just naturally brightening or in a robotic way? I think you need to be more cautious ...

Thank you for the review! :) Not your most engaging start to a chapter! Maybe you could start the chapter by combining the first two sentences and just put 'Quinn ...

Thank you for the review! :) Not your most engaging start to a chapter! Maybe you could start the chapter by combining the first two sentences and just put 'Quinn ...

Thanks for the review! It could be spelled Belle, but I thought Bell fit her a little more. I like picking nicknames that fit the character's personality, even if they ...

Thank you for the review! I know you mentioned that nothing happened plot-wise, but is there anything that intrigued you in this chapter? This chapter may or may not have ...

Thank you for the review! I've been struggling to write Issac & Quinn at this point in the story, so it's good to know what worked and what didn't. (I've ...

Thank you for the review! :) I'm glad that the smile part made sense after you read the static part! I was worried that it wouldn't be clear who Issac ...

I don't know why I never replied to this review, but thank you for taking the time to review my book's prologue! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far ...

You're welcome! :) (Cute avatar, by the way!)

You're welcome! I hope it was helpful. :)

Thank you for the review! And don't worry about taking awhile to do it - life happens, and #RevMo is the perfect time to get back into the story.

You're welcome!

You're welcome! And don't worry about it - it happens to the best of us. :)