Mageheart

That's okay! You did a great job with it throughout the poem, but that was one area that I thought you could maybe revise. :)

You're welcome! I'm glad it helped. :)

You're welcome! And I can definitely see it now that you pointed it out. :) I bet you'll really like his works. :)

You're welcome! I'm glad it was helpful. :) Let me know if you have any questions about it!

Thank you for your review! I'm probably going to take a little bit before I get chapter six up - since I haven't even written it yet - so hopefully ...

I'm so happy someone finally wrote a poem about chicken cannibalism. We've been feeding leftover chicken to our chickens for years . Now that I'm a little older, I've definitely ...

Okay, so this chapter had a lot of exposition. Yeah. ^^" I wanted to break it up a little bit, but it's not really possible to - especially since the ...

Thank you for the review! Quinn didn't think that her dad's outbursts would affect her - he hadn't shouted at her in the past, but he raised his voice that ...

I had a really long response to your review typed up, but for some reason it didn't send my review - and it erased all of it. :( I'm not ...

Oooh, that's a great idea! Thanks for the suggestion. :)

Thank you for the review! I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but any text in quotes doesn't count towards the points of the review - so you ...

I completely forgot to reply to this review, but thank you for leaving it! I really appreciate the grammar tips, and I'm glad you loved my creepy supernatural man. :)

Thank you for the review! For the most part, I think the conversation between Quinn and the zombie guy was well done. I thought it was a little odd that ...

Thank you for your review! This feels like a young YA novel, so its nice to have this scene this the two main characters discussing their sexuality. That's exactly the ...

Thank you for the review! It made me grin the entire time I was reading it. :) SAMESIES Samesies x2. :P Make sure to let your mother know that they ...