Mageheart

Hi AnarchyWolf! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I really liked this chapter. Noel and Elias are both really cool, and Luca is a very interesting character. You've ...

Hi MicrohieraxFT! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I really like this story. I noticed the narrator has changed. Is each chapter going to be different instances involving ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to do the promised review! :D Like I've told you, your world-building and the actual writing in this story is great. I'm interested in seeing what ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to do the promised review! :D In this chapter, you've once again done an excellent job at giving the reader information without dumping it. I also ...

Hi, yizhongt! Mage back yet again to review! You're doing a wonderful job of not dumping information on the reader. As I continue reading this, I still feel that you ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to review! Once again, I loved the chapter. The amount of world building is amazing. You've created planets and histories for characters that have only been ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to review! I prefer to read all of the story so I understand what is going on, so that's why I'm reviewing this at the moment ...

Hi, MicrohieraxFT! Mage here to review this awesome story! :D First off: It was very well written. Even though I know what it's about because of the description you provided, ...

Salve, Alice! (That's Latin for greetings, in case you didn't know.) Mage here to do the promised review! :D Emma loved her great aunt but what if they also thought ...

Hola, Alice! Mage here to do the promised review! “I’ll never forget it. Her face was untouched and…her glassy eyes were staring up at the ceiling in terror. There was ...

Hullo, my name is Magestorrow. You killed my favorite character, prepare to die. *coughs* Anyways, hi there. Mage here to do the promised review. Nothing had changed since last night. ...

Howdy, Alice! Mage here to do the promised review! :D She felt like Alice lost in an unfamiliar world with no one to trust. I swear I was going to ...

I wanted to spice things up with different greetings, so...Yo, Alice! Mage here to do the promised review! :D Sorry that it's on the short side. It had been months ...

Ahoy, Alice! Mage here to do the promised review! This chapter I was lucky enough to be introduced to some new characters, so let's get to it! Emma stood up ...

Hiya, Alice! (Felt like I should change the greeting up a bit.) Mage here to do the promised review! :D “Well” Sebastian spoke, interrupting Emma’s thoughts, “I’m afraid I have ...