Mageheart

My original plan was to leave comments on the chapters leading up to the most recent installment, but it looks like you haven't gotten any reviews on your three most ...

Hey, Blue! Your grammar is on point, like it usually is. I may or may not have somehow read this chapter and the one before it out of order, which ...

Hey, TheWeirdoFromBeyond! I apologize for taking so long to review this chapter. I'll try my best to make sure this doesn't happen again with future installments of your story! Building ...

Hey, Feather! I apologize for taking so long to read and review this. I'll try to not take as long with any future installments! First off, let me just say ...

Hey there! I apologize for how long it's taken me to review this part of your story. I'll try to be better about it in the future. In the previous ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Ooh, interesting! I've never read a story where a protagonist was a lucid dreamer. It's a unique touch that ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Oh, man, I really loved this chapter. I know you didn't like how it turned it out, but I ...

Hello, LadyBird! I hope my review can do your work justice. I wonder if anyone actually takes Lily and Fan seriously. If there are people who do, I suspect that ...

Hello, LadyBird! I hope my review can do your work justice. One chapter in, and I already love this novel. I have a soft spot for ghosts and grim reapers ...

Hello, GodfreysBouillon! I hope my review can do your work justice. I wonder if Estienne is going to feel guilty about having noticed something that could have possibly suggested a ...

Hello, GodfreysBouillon! I hope my review can do your work justice. The shift in your writing style from the last part to this one was sudden, but I'm sure you ...

Hello, GodfreysBouillon! I hope my review can do your work justice. I haven't read Beowulf yet, but I saw the replies to the review below mine and let me just ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. I never disliked Jonathon, but I think this chapter is the one that made me finally fall in love ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Well, shoot. I was expecting Karikoff to go off and do something stupid after that woman was killed, but ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. This chapter was really good. I'm not sure why I haven't realized it earlier, but some of the best ...