Madi

Little hard to follow. Have you posted part of the story before this one? I feel as though i've picked it up from halfway through and have no idea who ...

- So far I think it's pretty good, but it drags on a bit and sometimes things happen that I don't quick know where you're coming from. Like when Jake ...

Very intriguing point of view and opinion. Well written. You were right when you said very short story..... but it gets the message across well. I like it. :) I ...

I agree with June3. This almost made me cry, which is definately a good thing. If I feel something when I read a book, I know that it's a story ...

This is a really good story so far. It is interesting, and what made me want to read it is the description where you wrote, 'It's from the point of ...

Oh my gosh!!! I'm so in love with this story. At first, I was hesitant to read it, since i'm not much of a romance girl, but I love it ...

I really like this story. I wouldn't change anything save for a few gramatical errors, which, let's face it, everyone makes, and also the way the beast is talking. It ...

It's not lame, and you're a fantastic writer. I like how you gave all the description of what she was going through, and let the suspense hang by not telling ...