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Re: Flash Fiction- Under the Gaze of God
Hi there! Can I start off by saying that you captured my attention from the very beginning? Your descriptions, your word choice, your syntax. It was all weaved together effortlessly ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: A Day I Won't Remember
Hi there! I completely agree with what Valo said. The descriptions are beautiful but there is not enough action. What I would suggest is adding maybe how she sang with ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: It's Me. Your Greatest Friend.
Hi there! I'll be honest here... at first, I was a bit skeptical of the second person viewpoint (it's not the most common viewpoint out there) but as your piece ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Melting Diamonds
Hi there! Let me start by saying that the ending wasn't predictable in the sense that a reader always hopes for a good ending, for everything to turn out perfectly. ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully
Hi there! I'll be honest here; I'm usually not one that likes to read about heavier subjects (I'm more of an action-adventure based girl) so I commend you for having ...
Dec 6, 2013