MadameLuxestrange

Kagi, this poem wasn't bad. It was just deeply unnerving. You give such great advice on my stuff that I can't imagine you not writing anymore! Please, for my sake ...

Loved it! I liked that there was something that didn't make it simple, like most love stories. I think that it was very well written. I would've liked a little ...

Okay, so I really enjoyed this. You had great imagery and descriptions which made it so easy to picture the scenes in here. I think that was your strongest point ...

Okay, I thought that this was pretty good. There were a couple of grammar things that other people already pointed out and the whole thing with repetition was also touched ...

I really loved this! The only thing I really had trouble with was understanding where the story was taking place. I felt like you didn't separate the flashbacks very well ...

Luxe here, as requested. Okay, this was a good piece and it has so much potential to be great. I do agree with the grammar mistakes that were pointed out ...

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Hiya! I'm Luxe. This story made me giggle. There were several grammar mistakes with commas, so my reccomendation is to go back through and read it aloud to yourself so ...

Hiya! I'm Luxe and I'm going to review this for you. I very much liked the storyline that you've got going. There were several grammar errors that are easy fixes, ...

Hiya! I'm Luxe and I'm going to give you a review on this! Okay, I'm going to start with character development. To be honest, I don't really think your characters ...

Hiya! I'm Luxe. This was well-written and you used good word choice and voice. However, I thougt that there wasn't much of a story behind this. Your main character didn't ...

Hiya! Sorry, this is going to be a speedy review. I thought that this piece had a lot of emotion in it. There's this power that sets over the reader ...

Wow! I was going to say something about how it would be impossible for Autumn to have made it through being on the T-boned side of a car that got ...

I liked this a lot. The story line wasn't as original as you could've made it, but it was written fine. My thoughts on the writing were that it did ...

Hiya Wicked! Long time no see. Anyway, I really liked this. There are some things that I would like to know. I would like a little more background about what ...