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Re: The Slenderman
He sounds like a monster magian to me, with his top hat. Dark magic ;)
Jul 20, 2012 -
Re: Slowly, She Radiates
Thank you. :) I never noticed how awkward it all was. I shall work on that.
Jul 6, 2012 -
Re: Conquering Fear
Yes, I was trying to keep it short. It was an in-the moment kind of thing. That's a pretty good idea though. :D Maybe I might use it.
Jun 29, 2012 -
Re: The Black Doors Chapter 4
It's clear to me that Destiny wants to be more than friends with Adriel... I just want to read more.
Jun 26, 2012 -
Re: Happy Chapter 5
It seems that the others have hit all the points that need correcting. Wow. Josh has no happy place except when he's with Laura. It's nice to see different surrounds ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: The Black Doors Chapter 1
I like this. It feels dreamy and nostalgic. I feel like I can connect to this personally. I can't wait to read more of this. :) I randomly found your ...
Jun 23, 2012 -
Re: I'm out of time.
Thank you ^^ Yes, the way you write it looks better.
Jun 22, 2012