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Well, I'd definitely recommend it (well obviously since I made this post). If you just try the first few pages you'll be able to tell if you like it - ...

I didn't actually realise there were squares in the poem until I recently read over it. They're em-dashes, I copied it from word so it must be a formatting problem. ...

Just edit this, please. Proper spelling, proper punctuation all that unimportant stuff.

Ah, okay - that makes things clearer. I've read parts of The Waste Land and I had read the translation of the epigraph but didn't make the connection. So would ...

Thanks for the reviews - The yes' do have a meaning, probably to vague or obscure to anyone but me or someone thinking similarly. It was an idea I borrowed ...

Thanks everyone for your comments, they are much appreciated. I'll see what I can do to improve it. I'll definitely fix up the syllable differences so that it flows a ...

Much better. I think that version 2.1 is a real improvement. Flows really nicely.

This, I think, though I am not absolutely sure, is a poem by John Montague an Irish poet who was born in Brooklyn. Why keep doing it?

Wow, thats true, I totally forgot about it when I wrote it. I will re write it and if I do it in time I'll re submit it. Thanks for ...

Untitled was a working title, I decided to call it "Age". Does that sound right to you guys? Two people out to do only their best - good point Amelia. ...

Thanks before_umbrellas, I was pretty happy with the word choice in the first two stanzas especially, it took quite a bit of time. The chirping of the birds, I was ...

Thanks for the comments Amelia and something euclidean, I'd kind of forgotten about this poem. Also, "Lying in the garden of my mind" didn't sound quite right to me; the ...

The starting description in the second part, the description of the colours of the painting is really well done. The way that you do describe the colours and the way ...

Thanks to all of you, your opinions are much appreciated.

I'm dittoing The Abhorsen Trilogy, Harry Potter and His Dark Materials. Other than that I think that Farseer Trilogy By Robin Hobb deserves to be on the list.