Mackdaddy77

I do see what you are saying; I guess I just took it as a form of making love. But when in love smiles and laughter do matter. The joy ...

I liked it. It seemed to flow really well. When you used the imagery and descriptions, it really pulled me in. The thing like where you said, "You kissed me ...

I thought it was really good. Your description of things was done very well. It is like you experienced it yourself. It felt like it could just grab your emotions ...

I thought it was really good. It really grabbed my attention. And I wanted to know what happens. "Do they become united"?, "Is he playin her"? When are you goin ...