Mackattack

I love the idea you have but maybe you should add some detail as to what they are wearing and why they are there. I realize that this is a ...

This is really an inspirational piece of art here, you should be very proud of it. I can tell by your writing style that you will go far in life ...

This is an interesting concept you have here, i like the interactions between characters. I think you should just watch out for grammar mistakes, and watch out for cut off ...

This is a really unique concept. I love it so far, but next the chapter could have some more description on what they look like. Overall I love the piece, ...