Mackattack

Fabulous as always Wolf. Now you wanted a review so here we go! The first sentence you put "once I finished rereading the letter's first two paragraphs of the letter" ...

Hello darling I am here to review your piece! Overall I thought it was a beautiful piece. I do have some nitpicks though. I think you just need to spruce ...

Ok it is Mina time ;-) the power couple review. alright I am stoked for the next chapter, you really impressed my with this one. I do have some nit ...

Sarsten... Noooooooo I wanted Harston :-( Oh well, at lest there was some Harston action. Anyway Wolfie, I'm here to review! Overall you did a great job, I loved how ...

This is a good story considering you started when you were six. I like the suspence and drama you added into the mix, it hard to accomplish that. Now I ...

This is a good story considering you started when you were six. I like the suspence and drama you added into the mix, it hard to accomplish that. Now I ...

Over all its a good strong piece. One part I'm a little picky about is in the begging where you put: "Should...." I think this is not needed. That's just ...

OK overall its a good story with a solid foundation. I think your just rushing into this too much. I suggest you take it slow and develop you characters more. ...

I think you have a great start. Although I think you should take a deep breath and slow down. You are moving they story along a little fast and that ...

Dun Dun Dunnnnn! I love the cliffhanger! alright I hope in by doing this will stop your efforts in trying to destroy me ,or delay them. :-) OK, I saw ...

Hello Wolfe I hope you enjoyed NY. Meanwhile I'm stuck doing MAP testing :-( Enough about me though I am fabulous, this topic is really about your story. OK overall ...

Overall I thought this was a good piece and a strong beginning. The only problem I have is the narration, when you first write a story I know you want ...

I love the suspense you give at the end , it makes my eager for the next chapter. Although you just have on spelling mistake here "I begin the fiddle ...

I think this is a creative idea you have here, I really like the interactions between characters , and the plot you have going on. Now here comes the bad ...

This is a really good 2nd part. I'm happy that you have continued this story , and i am promising to stick with it till the nail-biting end. The one ...