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Re: Bill's Dilemna
Par 3: "I don’t yet have its coordination back." Maybe "my coordination" instead of "its". Par 4 "...and I shudder to think" You can probably leave out everything after "had ...
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: WORK IN PROGRESS
Advice from another person: "The story was OK, not much emotion, not much excitement. Sort of drab, I have to admit. Try to spice it up." I completely disagree, this ...
Oct 1, 2006 -
Re: Cold (But I'm Still Here)
Hello you! Thanks for the fun read! I don't want to post my full reply here because it will be hard to read. Instead I'll be sending you a word ...
Oct 1, 2006