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Re: First Haunt (working title)
I love this lol, I love that its a world that you can completely do what you want. I wish life was like this, I think this definatly something fun ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Renesmee Cullen
Hi, Ok first off I think this has mega potential its just that its more than predictable, its almost self explanatory. I think if your going to write about renesmee ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: A Vampires Kiss
I think its great, I am more of a werewolf guy myself but thats not important =). Its very interview with a vampire, I think the whole transformation seen should ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Not Here
Hi, I really like this I think its very unique and can be anything u want at this point. I definitely think you should continue this your writing is very ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Apocalypse
Hey , First off I think all writers who tackle Armageddon are daring and brave. I like you story it has unbelievable potential, except for that its very random and ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Balema - A World of Many Elements Chap 1 EDIT
This, in my opinion is not a good place to begin. I feel as if you flooded your brain into one page. The environment is well thought out but this ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Deeper Love Inside
Life is pointless, death is inevitable, and love is the only variable that keeps them from clashing for our fate. But without love our fate of death, becomes our destiny. ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: By Sun, By Moon - Prologue
Hi KJ, i really enjoyed your prologue it gave me a sense of the love hate relationship between both Pack mate towards Pack mate and human towards wolf. You told ...
Jun 30, 2009
