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Omg thank you!

Omg thank you for enjoying it! I got the opening idea from a Dark Deception trailer where we see the soul of the protagonist form from the void into the ...

I’m so happy you stuck around. It’s one thing to read and review a story once but to come back to it for every chapter is appreciate to much! I’m ...

Hello! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter! Also I’m not sure if I just read this wrong but I want to specify that Evans the narrator ...

Hello! First of all, damn I’m surprised you were able to not be confused after not reading the prologue or chapter 1. I’m happy I was able to make the ...

Hello! First I’m glad this story made a good first impression for you, I feel like having a strong start for the story is the most important part. And I ...

Hello! Thank you for the review! Firstly, thank you so much for the dialogue grammar resources, grammar has always been my weakness so this was very helpful! I think I ...

Thanks for the review, and I’m glad you appreciate me trying to make this story accessible to everyone. I mostly did it because the Dark Deception fandom is so dead ...

The way it felt like a slap in the face when the guy said the book was from his lover 😭

Thank you so much! I’m really happy you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much for reading and liking it! Dark Deception is a really cool game and a lot of the concepts in this prologue come from the game so ...

Thanks so much for this review. Yeah the description parts in this chapter I really tried my hardest at and I’m quite proud of. I wanted to make this place ...

Here’s a more detailed response since I have more time on my hand rn Thank you so much, I’m glad you like the concept but I unfortunately can’t take all ...

I had a feeling it was intentional since it only applied to certain words but I was just struggling to find something to critique lol but I wanted to make ...

Thank you so much! You’re my first review! I hope you also check out chapter 1 :)