Lynne

hello. I think you did a good job; when I read it I kept on giggling and I couldn't stop because I know exactly how you feel at times like ...

Wow... That's all I can think to say about this piece. It was moving, dramatic, beautifully structured, and horrible that this happened to you. There's only one little thing that ...

Thats really pretty. I love the way that in you presented it, you left it wide open, but not. I don't know if you meant it to be like that, ...

Hey. Reviewing isn't my forté, but I read this and felt I had to. (It's pretty damn awesome) 8) Okay, here goes. Memories are the clouds I tried to hold ...

I liked it, but I'm not entirely sure how i feel about snake metaphor. Like everyone else, i have to agree; your last line is remarkable. I think you did ...

I enjoyed reading this poem. Normally, I'm fonder of a little more length in a poem, but in this case, i actulay think it fit well. Close my eyes So ...

I enjoyed reading this, when i saw it on the front page and read it, i thought that it was a song. Couldn't figure out a steady tempo for it, ...

Like 'Elizabeth Darcy' said, i'm not quite sure if the last stanza flowes quite as well as the other ones, that could just be my inner perfectionist speaking. You really ...